User blog:Gocubs711/New Story Idea

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Christmas
I hope all you guys had a merry one! I saw my cousins for the first time in a couple years. It was very fun, and I missed hanging out with them. Also, I've been saving up my money for a Wii U, and I got enough today. I was gonna go get one tomorrow, but my dad brought one out and said he's sell it to me! I have to say....its pretty frickin sweet.

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I suppose this might seem redundant, but I've been having an idea for this for a couple days and I want some opinions on it. (The characters will be reffered to as simple names like Bob and Joe, although that will not be the names in the end)

There is a legend in the villiage of Bobville (again, gonna change). When the two moons become one, the ancient being Joe will emerge, clad in a skin of red and gold. Unless defeated, his wrath will destory Bobville, and turn every resident into his mindless slaves. The hero of Bobville must rise and vanquish the being, else Bobville and the world fall to Joe's rule.

That's basically like the propechy part that sets the basis for the whole story, although it sounds a lot less serious with those names XD. Opinions? And i'm open to criticisms, you dont have to sugarcoat it if you dont like it. Thanks!