User blog:Hipchick/is it good?

I wrote a new show, and I wanna know if its any good or not:

My Sims Rockstars:

Lyndsay: Hello, and welcome to- *drum roll*

Chaz: My Sims Rockstars!

Lyndsay: We brought 20 cool sims to camp-

Chaz: to have a chance to be in a music video and win 10,000 simoleans

Lyndsay: Here's one now. Hey Travis!

Chaz: Hey chump.

Travis: I'm not a chump!

Chaz: Yes you are!

Travis: no I'm not!

Lyndsay: Quit fighting! Someone else is here.

Beebee: Hey!

Travis: *to himself* Uh-oh.

Beebee: Yey! It's Travis. *starts chasing Travis*

Lyndsay: This is why I thought Beebee shouldn't have come.

Chaz: Yeah, I mean, I'm way cooler.

Lyndsay: *sacastically* Yeah, I wonder why.

Chaz: Someone's here.

Lyndsay: two people!

Summer and Liberty: Hi!

Liberty: Hey Travis. *runs over to him*

Travis: hey Liberty!

Chaz: Hey Summer!

Summer: Hey Chaz! *blushes*

Lyndsay: Twelth time already! Someone's here!

Poppy: I'm Poppy, and This is my friend Yuki!

Yuki: And I'm Yuki, and this is Poppy!

Poppy: when someone says it, then you don't say it back.

Yuki: Aww....

Lyndsay: Slowpokes.

Chaz: We're not that slow! Hey, someone's here!

Sandra: hey guys!

Lyndsay: Hey! Now, over there!

Sandra: I see Rhonda!

Rhonda: Hey Sandra!

Chaz: Guys! Someone's here!

Poppy: HOPPER!!!!

Hopper: Hey Poppy!

Chaz: Look! The trio!

Candy: Hey C-man!

Summer: *Summer gets angry at Candy* Don't call him that!

Chaz: It's ok Summer.

Sapphire: Omigosh omigosh omigosh this so rocks better than last weeks Candypalooza!!!

Zach: Saph, it's probably tied!

Candy: Yeah Saph.

Lyndsay: Next!

Sapphire: Omigosh it's Leaf!!!

Leaf: Wow. That was your short sentence ever from you!

Sapphire: *blushes and giggles*

Lyndsay: More people guys!

Poppy: Hey Pinky!

Pinky: Hi Poppy! These are my friends Clara and Renee.

Clara & Renee: Hi

Lyndsay: Hi. Over there.

Clara: Hey Makoto!

Pinky: Hey Maria!

Renee & Poppy: Group hug! *They all hug*

Chaz: Someones here!

Lyndsay: I might have to be over there for those two!

Ginny: Pirates are better than Ninjas!

Star: No, Ninjas are better than Pirates!

Lyndsay: No fighting! Chaz, next!

Chaz: Follow me and we'll make the teams!

Lyndsay: there will be two teams.

Chaz: The captain for the first team is Candy!

Candy: Awesome!

Chaz: Team name?

Candy: Uh... The Rockers!

Lyndsay: The other one is Poppy!

Poppy: Suh-weet.

Yuki: *Giggles*

Lyndsay: Your team name?

Poppy: The Singers.

Chaz: Pick your teammates* Checks watch* ... Now!

Candy: Leaf!

Leaf: Awesome!

Poppy: Maria!

Maria: Yay!

Candy:Star!

Star: Great!

Poppy: Yuki!

Yuki: U-huh!

Candy: Makoto!

Makoto: *Runs to Candy*

Poppy: Sandra!

Candy: Sapphire!

Sapphire:*Does a wierd dance to Candy*

Poppy: Beebee!

Candy: Liberty!

Poppy: Hopper!

Hopper:*Sproings all the way to Poppy*

Candy: Ginny!

Star & Ginny: What!?

Poppy: Renee!

Candy: Summer!

Poppy: Pinky!

Candy: Travis!

Poppy: Clara!

Chaz: Final vote!

Candy: Uh...

Zack:*Waves his hands crazily*

Candy: ...Rhonda!

Zack: What?!

Poppy: Zack.

Chaz: OKAY, the Rockers, come with me

Lyndsay: Singers, come with me.

Chaz: Candy, you're bunked with Leaf.

Candy: Cool!!

Chaz: The rest are: Sapphire & Makoto, Ginny & Travis, Star & Rhonda, & Summer & Liberty.


 * Camera go's to The Singers*

Lyndsay: Poppy, you're with Pinky.

Pinky: That's good!

Lyndsay: The rest is: Yuki & Clara, Renee & Maria, Hopper & Beebee, & Sandra & Zack.

Chaz & Lyndsay:*Apart and to their teams* The first contest Bed Making!

Rhonda: When has that been considered a contest?

Chaz: Isn't, I just want to see how your style is!

Lyndsay: Bye!

Clara: Yuki, Please, can you give me the photos.

Yuki: Where!

Clara: In my bag.

Yuki: Okay.

Sandra: Can I get the top bunk?

Zack: Okay, I guess.

Sandra: Still mad about Candy not choosing you?

Zack: Yeah.

Sandra: Then lets do a prank on Candy and Sapphire then.

Zack: Okay.

Poppy: Question Pinky.

Pinky: I'm not giving you my flower pillow!

Poppy: I brought mine, but do you know where I put my scarf?

Pinky: No.

Speaker in Both Cabins: Time's up!

Candy: Done!


 * Everyone's at campfire*

Lyndsay: Really fast everyone!

Sapphire: I know!!

Leaf:*Laughs*

Sapphire:*Blushes*

Chaz: the winner is *looks on clipboard* It's a tie!

Everyone: What!?!

Lyndsay: It's Sandra & Zack, & Travis & Ginny!

Candy: That's 4!

Chaz: We're going by bunks!

Lyndsay: Fine! New challenge: TUG-A-WAR!

Chaz: On Elastic!

Zack: What!?!

Lyndsay: START!


 * They start, but then Travis, who was at the back of the rope, gets a phone call, and Sandra, who was also at the back of the rope, Gets a text message, and they both let go. And Ginny and Zack were pulling so hard, that they stared going the wrong way into some mud*

Chaz: Another tie!

Zack: Seriously!?!

Sandra: Sorry!

Lyndsay: Well, good night!


 * When everyone besides Sandra and Zack are asleep*

Sandra: let's see what we're missing.

Zack: Ok.

Sandra: Scarf.

Zack: Check.

Sandra: Rope.

Zack: Check.

Sandra: Sapphire's diary.

Zack: Check.

Sandra: Headphone breaker.

Zack: I'm not sure that's real.

Sandra: Screwdriver.

Zack: Check.*looks up and laughs* Bunny PJ's! Seriously!?!

Sandra: It's the only thing left in the store.


 * There at the Rockers cabin, post pictures of Sapphire's diary everywhere that Leaf would go, break Candy's headphones, and are about to leave*

Sandra: Let's go.*They leave, but Sandra loses her shoes, and Zack's goggles fall off**Hi five each other*